Through These Walls

What I really like about this, is the color scheme you chose. Teal works very well with white/grey/black and makes it look rather sophisticated.

The one thing that bothers me, is the part where he is coming "out of" the wall. You did good by picking a crack in the wall as his entering point, but it could be far more pronounced. For example creating a hole in the wall would have increased the feeling of depth and an actual break-through. Right now, he wouldn't reaky fit thru the crack.

Another thing that would have helped creating more depth is adding a shadow from the guy. Now the light source is a bit unfortunate on him to do so, but some shadow on the wall left of him might have done wonders. This also applies to the whole piece. Adding some shadows on the left and highlights on the right would create a far better atmosphere.

Alltogether I think the piece is missing depth. Everything feels like it is on the same layer and due to that the piece lacks something. Even if I can't quite teell what exactly.

Technically you did a great job! The guy is cut out clean and I like how you used the 3D elements and splatter.
I am always a sucker for adding something blurry in the foreground, maybe you could have done so by adding another 3D element at the right side, being cut off by the canvas and blurry.

Mmh, I think I would have liked if some of the splatter would be on the guy, too. Like his arm or neck. Make him a little more dirty xD.

However, I think you have a good visual concept and great technical skills.

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